Yeah my new poem!! this is the 2nd poem!

""The Beginning of Life"""

A wind blow on your mind,
A water deep in the sea,
The thousand miles is beginning,
From the one step to the front,
Days to day to struggled and triumphs
with the life's creature,
We must to encounter challenge,
one by one,
Every decision that we making is road that to,
gain experiences.

Finally ,this poem made in 3days 2 night!! happy!